Jhunour's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Protection Movie]

successful and promising, need some improvements

You have understand the music very well and this movie is really touching.
perhaps as a very short movie about 1 min, it still needs a little improvements in some details, for example maybe the camera movements and switchs need to be more active and meaningful other than still (this unlikely make the file much bigger), some graphic, scene and my music can be more elaborate.
Overall you have done very successful and I hope this movie would be accepted by NG as a "protection" animation or others, just like you do.

altr responds:

Oh, ya, I wanted to add SO much more(like rain flowing into the gutter,cats fighting by the dumpster,ect.), but I didn't want it over 200kb.
Spent like 3-4 hours on those stupid leaves blowing, trying to optimize it (I can be a dipshit though, wasn't realy that hard =D ).
But ya, fading the scenes cost way less in file size then moving buildens and trees and such,unfortunatly.
And much thanks on the music, cause without it this would've never been made ...