successful and promising, need some improvements
You have understand the music very well and this movie is really touching.
perhaps as a very short movie about 1 min, it still needs a little improvements in some details, for example maybe the camera movements and switchs need to be more active and meaningful other than still (this unlikely make the file much bigger), some graphic, scene and my music can be more elaborate.
Overall you have done very successful and I hope this movie would be accepted by NG as a "protection" animation or others, just like you do.